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Wednesday, February 20, 2019

Film review on “The Matrix: Reloaded”

The main aim for this piece was to warp with a second aim to entertain the reading hearing. I chose this genre because it gave me the misadventure to explore the langu come along within the genre only besides the origination. My targeted audience was from fifteen to twenty as I feel this age tramp will read the depiction review on The Matrix Reloaded which I did my piece on. I looked at a number of film reviews and their zeal but I decided to create my own with my ideas, which I intrust made it, more, creative.Throughout my piece I have tried to tack humour as well as adding relevant and consistant points. This is shown in the incision the story so farfor one, youre stark raving crazyI have used this humour because I was essay to steer away(p) from the standard review because I wanted to personalise it with my own bizarre style.Developing on this I didnt want to have too a lot comedy within the review as I feel it would be hard to sustain it to a high a quality if I p ersisted with it through out the piece. So I included it in oblivious sharp bursts to add colour to the review. When I did add the comedy I wanted to bring the contributor back to the point I was nerve-racking to get across with words like seriously though. This helps to remind the reader that the most important part of the composition is not the comedy but the actual review.I tried to use the above technique to rent the reader but I also this by using talking to like youre and we. These pro nouns makes the reader think that you are talking straight to them which keeps them involved in the writing.As the main aim of the piece was to persuade and secondly to entertain I had to choose my language very carefully. So I decided that I would use a lot of positive(p) emotive adjectives to persuade my readers to share my idea of the filmfunky calm down impressiveThe other main thing I had to think well-nigh was the audience I was writing for. As I aimed it at fifteen to twenty ye ars old I tried to include about teenage jargonCheck out these visualsI used the phrase check outas I feel that the bulk of the batch who would read this would relate to this kind of language as it addresses them in a friendly tone.Finally one of the main features of my piece is the layout and demonstration. This is a tonality part because when people pick up a review of something the offset printing thing that attracts them is how it looks. So I have tried to do this also by including a front cover which I put on that point to attract the reader and gives them a brief introduction of what the review is about.W here(predicate) I think theses presentational devices attains best was in the main review. I included a pick up from the scene with writing wrapped nigh it. The writing is actually about the picture, which gives the reader a taster to what the film will be like. This in my opinion is the form of persuasion as it makes the reader want to see the rest of the film.In my writing I made a lot of amendments in the presentational side of my review. As you can see from my archetypal drafts, the presentation is bland so I had to change so it was appealing to the eye. I did this buy using confiscate pictures from the film to complement the writing. The other main thing I did to the presentation was to use a background of The Matrix code which is a brandmark in the films, but I feel this could only be in truth appreciated by a Matrix fan.Regarding the actual writing the first draft I did was the style I was looking for so I only had to fine-tune it which gave me the opportunity to concentrate on how it looked.In my opinion the most successful thing which was included in my piece was the presentation and the way I adapted to my target audience.The presentation in the closing draft in my opinion looked really professional and captured the mood of the films.I thought my language in my writing really suited my targeted audience, this is shown hereget rea dy for the ride of your lifeI think that the age range that would read this would relate to this in a way they could appreciate.A major problem that faced me when I was writing my review was trying to get my presentation right. I found it hard to produce the picture I had in my mind, which I wanted it to like. But I got thither in there in the end with a lot of little(a) around on the computer.Overall I am happy with my net piece as I feel I met all of the criteria for writing to persuade and also adding my own style. If I was to do this piece of work again I would do some more research on the film as I feel this would strengthen my writing further.

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